My pathway

I decided to create an image that illustrates how the sport of soccer helped me reach my goals. Soccer has always been a big part of my life in a way that it has guided me to make better choices for my education. I have learned a lot through the struggles that I have faced, which is one of the reasons why it is relatable to my topic because it demonstrates motivation, passion, and dedication through blending modes and effects used in my graphic design draft. I was inspired to used different blending’s after reading “The Power of Images” article. It mentioned how every image demonstrates a message and seeing the pictures attached from 20th Century gave me the idea that those children were not working in those factories because they wanted too, it is a sad story to see that children are being forced to work at that age. I used dark colors at the bottom of my image to send a message that as a child I had difficult moments, but my life started to lighten up as I grew, which is towards the top of the page. I believe as if I not only captured the images I wanted to include but also, I was able to capture a clear message. Also, through The Five Basic Rules of Shot Composition, specially the Lines rule helped me place the text I wanted to use in my draft by creating a visual path to the solution, being the light to all the struggles through the stairs.

At first, I decided to start by mixing colors in one layer with any picture as practice before starting my actual draft. I did this through Hue/Saturation and through color balance even if we had not used it just because I wanted to give a different color to the stairs. After using different colors, I began my draft by adding an image to different layers and using the Magnetic Lasso Tool to have better image results. I also tried using the cropping tool, but in my opinion the Magnetic Lasso Tool works best because it allows me to add or delete any additional parts of the image after adding a Layer Via Copy. After adding two images I decided to lower down on the Opacity in order to blend the stairs and demonstrate a clear message. Lastly, when I was adding the stairs, I did not think of using a blending color because I wanted a bright color to be on my image (originally stairs were black and red) but, if I wanted to present the topic as a tuff experience, I needed to tone down on the lightness and add more saturation. Even after adding the stairs I felt as if something was missing. I tried to create ideas in my head of how I could add a message of motivation, but nothing came to mind until my roommate started talking. My roommate mentioned to me, “I am going to go study in the chinook building.” At that point my mind started running and told me to add text to the stairs image I had gotten from FreeImages website, also finding the soccer through FreeImages. The chinook building has a stair case where there are motivational words as you climb the stairs, which inspired me to do the same. Most of the process that I used through adobe was the Hue/Saturation and Magnetic Lasso Tool. It was very fun to play around with different colors, although I will recommend when using colors in your project to use a mouse, it was very hard for me not having a mouse, especially when using the magnetic lasso tool. Other than that, play with adobe! Use all the tools coming from the blur tool to using all the different brushes there are, you will be amazed with the differences those brushes can do.

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  1. Your design clearly shows that you have technical proficiency in Photoshop. I particularly think your use of the Magic Lasso and the transparency of yourself and the ball makes your design rather striking. All in all it seems like a very professional design that would make a good inspirational poster, and not just for yourself. The message you present is very universal and can be applied to anyone who wants to get motived. The only problems I can currently see are a few minor cosmetic touches. The placing of the words does not flow naturally. The message as it reads from top to bottom (where most people would read) makes it seems as though it’s written backwards. I would reverse the placing of them. I also think the background image of the stairs look a little blurry. I would suggest trying to find a higher resolution image or at least making the background a little more opaque so the extent to which is pixelated is a little less obvious.

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  2. I think you did a great job at cropping yourself and the soccer ball so that the background of the original photos are not noticeable. I also think that you did a good job with the overall message of your poster however the words were a little bit difficult to understand until I figured out that it was reading from the bottom to the top– But I do think the overall messaging connected to your topic well. Along with that I would also pick a bolder font for your words so that they stand out against the background a little more and it’s easier to read them! The last thing I would recommend is to sharpen the photo of the stairs or find one with a higher resolution because when it is blown up to that size it makes the background a little bit too pix-elated. Overall though, I think you did really well for the first draft! Good Job!

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  3. Hi, Brenda! This is a very creative concept with how you incorporated yourself, the soccer ball, and the stairs! I like the way you did the opacity of your images because me personally, I believe it makes it pop more and have more of an impact. You did a great job with the cropping of your images by using the magnetic lasso tool since it makes it a crisp outline. It looks like a very professional design with the images and having the motivational words, but with the words, it is awkward when I try to read it. It doesn’t go in order which can confuse your audience. I recommend changing the word order to make it flow better. Also, I would maybe change the the pixels because the quality isn’t the best. Overall this is a great start and I do like the concept. With just a few improvements, you will have a solid graphic design!

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  4. I like how I can see the inspiration in your design from the start. I can see the story being told without a need for a caption or a title. I can see the influence from the Chinook steps with the lettering on the steps. It also keeps the theme of a “pathway” consistent through the design. Looking at the design only, and not the writing, I can assume soccer is a part of Brenda’s pathway. If I were to improve this design, I would use a different color than green for the saturation. Something a little easier on the eyes such as a dark blue would help. I would also bold the text so it is more legible and easier to read.

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  5. First, thank you all for the amazing feedback that I received. I take the feedback very serious in a way that I can improve my work to make it better for my final draft. It took me quite a while to figure out what I wanted to do and how I wanted to use the saturation and the opacity in this project. I do believe and agree with everyone’s comments about making the text clear and bold for my audience to be able to read the message that is being said. Also, I will look into free images and to look for a better background image, maybe another set of stairs but a clear stair steps. The reason why I used this type of stairs is because I wanted to match my picture and for it to show that it is a ruff blurry path that everyone passes through at some point, but I will find their light, the open door to their struggles. The feedback was great! I will definitely change the text and try to fix my background for it to be clear.

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